28-06-2013, 14:34
Dobry tekst. Faktycznie warstwa fabularna kuleje, ale warsztatowo bardzo dobry, ciekawy i taki zdystansowany. Napisałeś, że jest to tekst o dojrzałej, partnerskiej miłości i chyba udało ci się to naprawdę dobrze opisać.
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Would you like to say something before you leave?
Perhaps you'd care to state exactly how you feel?
We say goodbye before we've said hello
I hardly even like you
I shouldn't care at all
Perhaps you'd care to state exactly how you feel?
We say goodbye before we've said hello
I hardly even like you
I shouldn't care at all